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(Edit): I've edited her design almost entirely. I've learned two valuable lessons from this - first of all, go with colours that match. 2nd, while superficial to an extent, the character's design must immediately reflect a part of their personality. The glasses I thought were a bit cliche but... who knows. Further edits might be made in the future.

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My first attempt at a character sheet. She is one of the first few characters that will be a part of the WindRider story.

Let me know what you guys think, I keep thinking that it looks too bland... : / I can make extravagant clothing designs but it'll be so unrealistic. Plus extra gears and stuff are not included in the basic reference sheet.
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~TacticianMark May 11, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Simple, yet effective... I like it!

Though here are some suggestions:
So from reading the small background info on her, she's a rogue of sorts, right? Her attire should be altered to look more like a rogue; right now, from a first impression without reading the text, she looks like a mechanic. If she's supposed to be a master of tactics, you could imply it more by giving her something stereotypical, like glasses.
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~mqken May 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the suggestion. I guess I'll rework her character :) Someone else also mentioned that she needed more clothing fitting of her character.
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Beautifully done. Camo pattern very nice and clean.
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~mqken May 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you... but I can't take the credit for the camo :( It was referenced.
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~Rekkou May 7, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I think the costume is quite optimum, not too fancy and definitely not bland either. My only question is that she's a genius strategist type right? but imo she's more like a hotblooded tomboy type.
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~mqken May 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So your advice is to change the design a bit to fit her role/personality? ... interesting, thanks :)
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~Rekkou May 7, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Having a genius that looked badass is also nice.
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